I know this is really short but if people like it I'll write more and I'll only know if you like it if you comment so if you do like it comment. This is just an experimental piece of writing so thats why its short.

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I was suffocating. Dying. I knew for certain that I would soon pass out. If I fought more I would pass out sooner and there was nothing I hated more than being unconscious. Even If it were possible for me to scream there was no one to hear me. The cold metal of the handcuffs chaffed my wrists and I was surrounded by the smell of my own hair as he used my favorite pillow to smother me.
I was mentally screaming out in pain. I was in pure unadulterated agony. It wasn't the multiple bruises or the deep gash on my abdomen caused by him and his knife. It was a pain so deep and so dark that it throbbed violently everyday and under today's current situation the pain exploded as memories flooded my head along with all the emotions I had experienced in the last three months. I knew that this time he wouldn't say some long speech. He had gotten it all off his chest the last time and that had given the team time to see that my tracker that was linked to my heart rate monitor was going off the brink. They had stormed and saved my life. This time he wasn't going to make the same mistake.
I thought about Dina, the closest friend I had in my new life who was more than likely dead now. I thought about his loving arms around me giving me my favorite thing- a hug, I thought about my parents faces and my mom's awful singing, I thought of all my friends in my old life who all thought I was dead (not so far from the truth is it?). I thought of my parents in a pool of blood, of their necks with that scarlet slash and I thought about his eyes that had once looked so lovingly at me but my memory saw those eyes wearing a psychotic murderous expression. This image stayed with me and in the distance I heard a ferocious bark and I thought of Lola and those eyes and then everything was black and quiet and cold.

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