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gretch73

on Aug 16, 2009
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Coopers P.O.V.
(to see what Cooper looks like http://media.photobucket.com/image/blonde%20hair%20and%20blue%20eyes/Haylesbabe/book/andrew.jpg?o=191 )

I was in my room listening to music with my best mate Chase, he and i had been mates since pre-school, but two years ago he moved away with his family and this is the first time we've really seen each other since then.

"Dude look at this chick!" he yelled pointing to a girl in a get fit magazine that i had lying around my room, "she's bloody bigger than me!! Wouldn't want to get on her bad side!" he said chuckling to himself; we could barely hear each other over the loud raw of my stereo.

"Cooper!!" i heard Ally yell exasperated.

She's my little sister, well she's not that much younger than me almost one year. See our mum got pregnant with me when she was young and the guy, my father who i haven't even meet (scum bag) took off as soon as he found out. She later meet someone else and got pregnant and had Ally, but that time the dude stuck with her and to this day i call him dad.

"Would you turn that racket down!!" she came bursting into my room and froze "oh hey i didn't know you had a friend over" she said blushing now at her outburst.

"Oh come on don't you recognize me lolly??" said Chase sitting up and using his pet name for her.

"OH MY GOD CHASE!!!!!!" Ally screamed and ran across the room and hugged him. Talk about awkward!

"I can't believe how big you've gotten!" said Chase spinning her around examining her.

"Oh come on its only been two years I couldn't have changed that much" she said blushing.

She may not have realised it but she has. The last time he saw her she had just turned 14. She was now 16 and all grown up. I mean it boys were coming round every afternoon. To be frank it was embarrassing seeing my little sister with a different guy every other day!

"Yes you have your absolutely gorgeous, if you don't mind me saying!" she blushed and hugged him again.

"When did you get back?! How long are you staying for?! Are Nate and Charlotte with you??" she was saying everything so fast it was coming out all slurred together.

Ally's P.O.V.

OMG!! i still can't really believe he's here. Sure he's my brothers friend but when we were little he was around so often it was like he was my big brother! Whenever he would stay the night I would always stay in Cooper's room with them and we would all pig out eating lollies hence his nice name for me.

"Me and Nate came up here with dad, he's looking at this place nearby and if he likes it we could be moving!"

My god could this day get any better, not only had i found my favourite lip gloss that i lost last week, got a discount on this really cute pair of black heals but my old best friends might be moving back to the neighbourhood!

"So where Nate now? Why didn't he come too?" i said pouting. I heard someone open the door, i turned around and to my surprise and utter joy i saw Nate.
"What's all the noise in here ab-.." he lost his breath when i wan up and hugged him so tight it winded him.

"Ouch what was tha. . Ally? Ally! Oh my gosh, Ally!!" he hugged me back picking me up of the ground swinging me around.

Wow he really had grown, if i didn't know any better i would have just thought it was another one of Cooper's hot friends. I mean i guess he looked the same his dark brown hair wavy just above his ears his piercing green eye's his cute little smile everything was good old Nate. Except the fact that was like a foot taller and two times musclier.

Nate's P.O.V.

I couldn't believe it was her. My best friend in the whole world who i missed so much since we moved. Gawd, she look beautiful as always. Although she had changed her beauty had just intensified.

Her bright blue eyes were about to burst out of their sockets. Her silky blond hair was bouncing around her face.
(too see what Ally looks like http://www.quizilla.com/user_images/C/CU/CUL/CULLENCHICKK/1239760988_3842_full.jpeg )

"Oh my goodness me, lolly you have no idea how much I've missed you!" i said pulling her back into a bear hug.

Two hours later
Ally's P.O.V

We were all sitting in Cooper's pigsty of a room. All catching up and talking about our lives these days. ". . and then the coach saw what i did to Peter and immediately gave me a spot on the team!" Nate finished and we all burst out laughing.

"Oh look at the time dad wanted us to get back to help him with some paper work" Chase said clearly annoyed he had to leave.
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lol go ALDI!

DMCarter
Nov 09, 2009 01:21
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wow really good (:
(yes I AM commenting) WOAH!! =p

cuty496
Nov 01, 2009 18:32
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wow gr8 stori :)

SANII-A
Oct 22, 2009 14:26
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sooo cutee!!!((: i love it ! && coopers HOT.^^

jannyfer42
Oct 15, 2009 16:49
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fantastic story. :) oh and i have to agree with you that having a big brother is such a pleasure to have. :) i love my brothers! :D
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keep up the great job! :D

candizzle
Sep 28, 2009 10:43
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Grrrr this story STILL hasnt made 1st page !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PEOPLE NEED TO COMMENT MORE ! COMMMENT COOMMMENT ! ! ! ! !

catherinexxo...
Sep 28, 2009 05:22
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@gretch73 yea no probbsss haha :) IM UR NUMBER ONE FAN WOOO

catherinexxo...
Sep 28, 2009 04:22
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ha i finished!!! and im on the 2nd page!!! my fans and readers rock sooo bad!!! THANK U GUYS!!! xx

gretch73
Sep 28, 2009 03:49
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heyyy i think u need more comments to get on the first page so yepp im writing another comment so ucan get on the first page hahaha :S ahhh i ca NOT do english soooooooo hard !

catherinexxo...
Sep 28, 2009 02:23
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wow well done ash! uve grown up so fast haha :) wow uve got soooooo many views ! and so many votesss!!!!! luv ya xx

catherinexxo...
Sep 26, 2009 23:10
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