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xXJynxXx

on Aug 13, 2009
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A night to remember, a day to forget.

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I used to think that my life was simple, you know get up got to school come home hang with friends then go to sleep and do it all again the next day. The thing is, well, I didn't like my simple normal life. I wanted to be different to have some kind of adventure, little did I know that's exactly what was about to happen.

Ch.1
I awoke to the same old alarm clock and the same old room, but I felt different of-course this was my eighteenth birthday wasn't I supposed to feel different? I didn't feel older didn't look older, or hell even act older. I gave up on trying to figure that part out and turned on the stereo kerli, walking on air was playing. Singing along I got in the shower, when I got out I did like I normally do and looked in my mirror that's when I noticed that the tattoo my parents had given me when I was a child was glowing. the tattoo was a deep purple rose and it was glowing?, Wow this is way to creepy for me, I was too busy staring at the tattoo that i didn't even notice the real changes about me. I had gotten taller than my normal five foot five, my hair was longer almost to the back of my knee's and inplace of the creamy golden color was black, My eye's had even changed from deep blue to mesmerizing green. I looked so much better than I used to but it was all too creepy for me to wrap my mind around.

Running downstairs I yelled for my mom. "What is it hon.... oh" she put her hand to her mouth with a shocked expression then sorrow passed over her features. "If this is Joey's idea of a prank its not funny, what am I supposed to tell everyone at school that I've gone goth? Mom, talk to me." I babbled not sure what was going on then I felt something sharp poke my lip.
I felt my teeth with my tongue only to find two very sharp canines. Jumping slightly as the point of one stabbed my tongue.
"mom, what is happening to me?" I asked tears streaming down my cheeks.
"come into the living room and sit down, I was hoping this would never happen that you would take after your father instead of her." She said in a sorrowful tone.
"W...What do you mean, mom?" I asked in a shaky voice.
"Danielle, I'm not your real mother. I know this is hard to hear ,but your real mother was a vampire and you are too as of midnight last night." She said in a totally calm voice, as though what she was saying was totally normal to her. "What's wrong with you are you crazy I can't be a real full blooded vampire..." My mother cut me off.
"I'm not sure how it works honey but I don't think your full blooded not only because your father is human but because you haven't graduated."
I looked at her like she was retarded and then out of the blue a woman appeared she was so beautiful with hair just past her hips and jade eye's just like I had. "Now you choose to look like me after all these years?" the woman said laughing at her misunderstood joke. "who are you?" I asked with my hand on my hip and my mouth stuck out.
"I am, Luminestinsa, and yes your guess is right my dearest Danielle, I am your mother." she said with an air of cockiness.
my jaw hit the floor and I wasn't sure why these two were actin like this.
"N.. No you can't be. I have blonde hair and blue eye's and i look nothing like you." I said in a defiant tone, I wasn't going to believe this, no way in hell was I going to believe this. "honey if you have blonde hair and blue eyes right now then I'm a dog whistling the twilight theme song." Luminestinsa said.
"now are you going to sit down and let me tell you who, what, and why your are?" not sure what to do I ran out of my house up the road and two cities away. wow that was fast how is it I can run that fast? I asked myself then I would look back on the last two minutes and a cold chill went up my spine. Was luminestinsa telling the truth or was I dreaming all of this?

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thanks i'll try that

xXJynxXx
Aug 14, 2009 11:45
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I'd slow it down a bit. I think your moving the storyline on a bit too fast and Id also suggest putting more emotion in it, but I like the story.

Cat-eyes
Aug 13, 2009 13:46
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If you are reading this its not finished so please be nice and any advice toward making it a bettter story would be ever so helpful.

xXJynxXx
Aug 13, 2009 13:16
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