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flirtynerdy6...

on Aug 05, 2009
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valentine

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I like to write poetry and this is my very first piece, plz comment i would greatly appreciate it! :)


I hate Valentines,
No one pays me any mind,
Eating cupids chocolate potion,
Hopefully I'll get a notion,
Of what I want this time.

I see this boy sit next to me,
He's 5 foot 8 with a cute face,
Could this be the one for me?
With shiny black hair and sparking blue eyes,
He just catches me by surprise!

He says hi and we conversate,
Then he says "do you have a mate?"
As both of our hands intertwine,
I've just found my new Valentine.

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AWWWW CUTE.....5 STARS MY FRIEND!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jycrocker26
Aug 19, 2009 16:48
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sooo super cute. i love it :)

o_0 peace, luv happiness from koolbeanz

kooolbeanz
Aug 18, 2009 12:11
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I really liked it.

Rebeca
Aug 14, 2009 07:28
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thats so cute i love it!

stargurl2
Aug 13, 2009 22:55
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i <3 it!!!

xxgoodgirlxx
Aug 11, 2009 10:38
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