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ahusann

on Jul 29, 2009
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It is done

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It is done-ahusan

What is this thing?

This thing that stings?

My birth unto death



Did I make the grade?

Did I pass the test?



Something within

Aching to bust out



Unknown void

Pulling me



Faster and faster

I can't avoid



Here, love is hate

Full of lies

Full of deceit



There, all is forgotten

No memory

A forever black void



Will an angel be there?

Does God really care?



World, I've done my best

But my best isn't good enough

I guess



I've tried to love

But it wasn't strong enough



Natural selection

Science can prove real

The weak and the ignorant

Soon will be gone



So it is I, not strong

Ashes to dust

I will be gone



It is done

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tnxx

ahusann
Sep 26, 2009 14:34
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ahhhhh so true

breakmemakem...
Sep 25, 2009 22:12
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tnxx

ahusann
Sep 23, 2009 03:29
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One word woah...i have never read anything like this it's...awesome
=)

teresa343
Sep 21, 2009 18:54
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awwww XD

SophiAina
Aug 24, 2009 17:12
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thnx 4 ur beautiful comments thnx - ladyoflitany

ahusann
Aug 04, 2009 05:31
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UH WOW!!! this is definaty my favourite your work is so accuarate love it x

ladyoflitany
Aug 03, 2009 14:09
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