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loopy94
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Jul 24, 2009
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Part 5 of 9
Author's note: hey peoplz! Here's part five. i know its short but im getting writters block. i hope u like it. please read and review! =)


" You guys! Come back. I know were we can find Ebony." I yelled. I didn't hear them coming, I was about to call again when Noir and Rosa walked over. I hear a car pull into the parking lot across the street, but I'm too worried about Ebony to look.
" You know where Ebony is?" Rosa asks.
" Yeah. We need to get everyone else." I replied.
" Wait, is she ok? What's going on?" Noir asks.
" She's fine, but some guys gonna force her to marry him." I replied.
" Oh, that's disgusting! Poor Ebony." Rosa cried. Noir gathered her in a hug. Suddenly, we heard a high-pitched scream. We looked over to see a girl running towards us with a beer in one hand.
" NOIR!!" She screamed. Rosa stiffened instantly and stepped away to glare at Noir. Suddenly, the girl tackled Noir in a hug. " Noir, my old friend. How are you?" She asked as she kissed him on his forehead.
" Who are you and what are you doing with my boyfriend?!" Rosa screeched. The girl turned to look at Rosa.
" Noir, you got a girlfriend?! I didn't know you had it in you." the girl squealed.
" Who are you?" I asked. Haven was laughing his head off next to me.
" Oh, how rude of me. I'm Marlem, but you can call me Marley." Marley said in a sing-song voice. She broke off laughing.
" Noir, how do you know this Marley?" Rosa snapped, she was now glaring at Marley. " And why are you here?"
" Oh, our car got tired, it needs more car juice." Marley replied pointing over to a car and a girl across the street. The girl waved. " That's Nephi. She's my bestest friend in the whole wide world!" Marley said in a sing-song voice.
" Noir, I'll ask you one last time. How do you know this Marley girl?" Rosa asked sharply.
"You see, back in Baldwin Park, Jones and BP High were pen pals. Marley was my pen pal. I met her a couple of times. She's a good kid." Noir took a look at Marley, who was trying to touch Rosa's hair. " When she's not drunk." He added.
" Marley? Do you know where the St. James Church is?" I asked. We needed to get to Ebony fast.
" Yeah. It's that way." Marley sang as she twirled like a ballerina, pointing towards the sky.
" It's across the street." Nephi cut in. Apparently, she was more sober then Marley.
" Thanks." I called as I ran to get everyone else. Soon everyone was surrounding the car. Marley was still twirling around.
" Who is that?" Joy asked, pointing at Marley.
" Marley, she's an old friend of Noir's. I'll explain later." I replied.
" Yeah, and so will Noir." Rosa added, still glaring at Marley and Nephi.
" Ooh, you? The cute one." Marley called.
" Who me? Sorry, Hun, I have a girlfriend." Haven replied with a smirk pulling Sayla towards him.
" No, not you, him." Marley shouted back pointing at me. Haven chuckled at his own stupidity. " Do you have five dollars you can spare? We don't have any money left."
" Sure. I replied, handing over a ten dollar bill. " That's for helping us find the church. Thank you."
" Your welcome, Oh, and thanks for the money." Marley shouted back as she and Nephi dashed towards their car.
" Your welcome." I called back. We all climbed into the car and drove across the street. Marley and Nephi stood and waved good-bye. We parked crookedly and ran inside the church.

Ebony's POV

Unfortunately, I didn't want to die so young, so I put on the scrap he calls a dress. Man, this thing is short. It barley covered my butt. I hate this. Why couldn't I have had a normal life? Oh, yeah, that's right. I'm a vampire, I'm not normal. God, I hate this.
" Ebony, you ready?" Cheese asks as she enters the room.
" No, but I have to be." I reply. Sigh, where's Heaven?
" Let's go then." Cheese says. We walk to a limo that's waiting for us. Inside of the limo is Lucien, two guards, and Vin. I tensed up at seeing Vin. Lucien noticed.
" So, Ebony? Not to happy about seeing your former lover here, are you?" Lucien chuckles. Vin glares at him. Then turns to look at me. His face is expressionless, but I see something cross is face. What is it? Anger? Regret? Or Jealousy maybe? We pull into the parking lot of the church. I look around me. I see a McDonald's and a gas station. I see two guys standing next to a car. They look familiar. Suddenly, I see a girl and a boy walk over to them. And said boy and girl have blue and pink hair! It's Rosa and Noir. Oh My God, they made it. Thank god.
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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OMFG awsome write more like now and dont stop ALLLLLL night and day until you have like 200 pages of the next chapter(i know im a little impatiant)
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Jul 26, 2009 20:50
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rite the next 1 sooner!!!! i luv this storY!
mychemrox97
mychemrox97
Jul 24, 2009 20:18
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dont worry. there is no way that id leave it like this.
loopy94
loopy94
Jul 24, 2009 17:53
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i love it write more
nativebecca
nativebecca
Jul 24, 2009 13:15
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I luv it
it's amazing
I hope thats not it
I need mor
this is really good
Darkinangel
Darkinangel
Jul 24, 2009 13:00
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hey guys! here's part five. i hope u like it.
loopy94
loopy94
Jul 24, 2009 12:43
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