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Guys! Here and finally the chapter that all of you were waiting for!!
I reached Chapter 10 (!!!) *round of applause* *wave and smile*
Oh! and I would like to thanks my SUPER FANS!!
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This chapter is for you guys! Without your enthuiasm and support, i wouldn't of continued writting it! I love you!!
Sooooo her it goes!

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Chapter Ten

Thinking. Just thinking. Alone thinking.
After Ian had gone I had walked up to my room and had laid back on my bed. Different thoughts passed through my mind, some had sense and were thoughts of things that I had once lived. But others were bits and pieces of memories, dreams thoughts...
I closed my eyes and let those thoughts bothering me, slowly flood my mind, violet, quickness, beauty, flu, death, mystery... and one single word that brought bad memories to myself... coldness.

I remember the night from my dreams, Cahill and his followers wanting to gain the power of the necklace, all desperate to feel within them the power that could be the death of everyone and which ironically keeps me alive.

FLASHBACK
Cahil's cold hands traced patterns along my cheeks. His cold breath made my hair flow wild caressing my face.
"Give it to me Alisa. You'll be normal if you get rid of it; this is want you always wanted..." his voice trailed of while his mouth began moving towards my neck slowly, he pressed his frozen lips against it in a failure attempt to kiss me.
"Don't touch me." I snarled. With a flick of my hand, and invisible force sent Cahil flying towards the wall were he slammed hard, causing him to loose some of his energy.
"Stupid human. You are worthless against any of us." He hissed.
"You Cahil, are worthless against me."
END OF FLASHBACK

I sat up trembling, stupid memory.
"Alisa, I'm back." I heard as Noelle's footsteps creaked under the wooden floor.
I walked down slowly without making any noise. When I reached the kitchen I saw as shockingly the food containers that were in plastics bags, were magically floating towards the cupboards.
I laughed, "Noelle wasn't it forbidden to use magic while doing the chores?" I asked her with a raised eyebrow.
She turned around from the fridge and smiled at me, "Would YOU prefer to do it?" she asked knowingly.
"Nah, it's going pretty well by itself."
I sat in the chair, that before occupied Ian and began setting the table for dinner.
"What are we having?" I asked
"Rice with chicken." She placed a fountain of what looked like... let's not explain what it looked like.
"Where's the chicken?" I asked bewildered.
"The black balls around the white things." She pointed to a burned (let's hope it was burned) round thing that was stuck to the serving spoon.
"Noelle, how about if we order take away?" I proposed, "And let me do the dinner from now on... and lunch... and breakfast."
She gave me a sheepish smile but ended up laughing at my expression. "Yes better, I was hoping you'd try it first and tell me what you think, that way I wouldn't have to risk it."
I laughed and turned to dump the "rice and chicken" into the bin, "Yeah, let's get poor Alisa poisoned shall we!" I said sarcastically.

We ordered take away, which arrived five minutes later, and sat on the kitchen table while eating it.
"Alisa I have to tell you something." began Noelle.
As I heard the serious tone in her voice, I stopped eating a lifted my gaze until it landed on her bright blue eyes.
"What is it?"
She began fiddling around with her food until she suddenly looked up and took a deep breath.
"I have resolved you're adoption Alisa."
I looked at her dumbly... what is she talking about?
"What are you talking about?" I asked repeating my thoughts.
"Alisa, you remember that we talked about sending you to a family, because the government wouldn't let me be your legal guardian, well I have found a family which is really keen in... adopting you."
I was frozen; I couldn't comprehend what was going on.
"And what family is this?"
"Well... umm... you know that yesterday while you were in the hospital I talked to Doctor Medicci?"
I nodded.
"Well I was actually discussing with him the fact that he has two kids adopted apart from, Dawn I think, who appears to be their real child. So the point is that I talked to him about any recommendations he might have as he has a contact with people..." she paused and her eyes flickered briefly towards her hands which were now clasped together on top of the table.
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Please don't make this like Twilight. I abosolutly love your story, but I would be kind of unhappy

leechienut97
Oct 13, 2009 23:30
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deadgirl! lol thanks for your comment! hahahaha I just couldnt help answering you back! xD Im soo happy you all like it!
xx

MysteryVampC...
Aug 16, 2009 14:34
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa­aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
so cool kind of saw that one coming but still
so cool you have a super talent you should so be a writer 'cause what's gonna happen when today's great writers DIE!
someone has to take their place ,you might have the talent

deadgirl-ony...
Aug 14, 2009 20:49
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Bout time!! you'd think that she'd of figured that out just a little sooner. I wonder what she'll do now?

shurtugal2
Aug 10, 2009 14:04
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now she knows wow luv ur writing

imavampirech...
Aug 07, 2009 20:55
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Thanks guys! im soo happy you like it! xD

MysteryVampC...
Aug 02, 2009 13:45
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it samaqzin!! def twilight copy in some parts, but it also is diferent in its own way! keep going, but I would lean away from the twilight influense a bit.

xXsexxyXx
Jul 29, 2009 23:50
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HMM twilight inspired i see =)
i like it.. alot..
keep writing!!

<3 misunderstood

misunderstoo...
Jul 28, 2009 13:38
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OHMIGOD!! she knows! Damn! what's gonna happen?!?!?!

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Jul 28, 2009 07:44
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muy chuloo! jaaja aki tods te piden k scribas mas... anda pobre date unas vacaciones k para algo stan.. jaja buenoo bss

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Jul 27, 2009 22:31
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