Become a fan
Yeah, tis good so far but slightly copied, for a second I thought it was before I got to the end.
No offence of anything because it's really good.
Keep going hon.
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[PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned
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"I look fucking gorgeous" I thought as I stared into the mirror.
Hmm.. I'm vain, I know but it is true. I do look drop dead gorgeous and everyone thought so too.
"Natalie!!" I heard my mum calling me. Ugh, what does she want now? I gave one last smile at the mirror and went down the staircase. Where is she? God, this house is so friggin big.
My house is not really that big but it was big enough to show how very well off we were. You see, there isn't many huge houses here just medium sized ones. My dad works for a banking company or something and his super-wealthy-almost-billionaire-boss just promoted him.
"There you are!" said my mum as I walked in.
She looks to be happy and in a good mood, which is not always. I just stared at her.
"I want you to bring your father's lunch to his office today".
My father always brings his own lunch since he had gotten food poisoning. The event had scarred him for life.
"What? Why? Didn't he brought his lunch with him this morning?" I asked my mum.
" No, he forgot," said my mum patiently.
Since when? My dad never forgets anything.
"But why do I have to? Adam can do it," I stated referring to my 16 years old brother who was 5 years younger than me.
"Because I told you to!" said my mum a little bit pissed off but still happy nonetheless.
"But I promised my friends that I would go out.."
"You do what I tell you to do young lady!" snapped my mum, cutting me short. Sheesh.
Before I went to my dad's office, my mum forced me to wear my best and most flirty sun dresses despite my protests. What's wrong with her anyway? I'm only going to my dad's fucking office.
As I stepped outside my house, everyone starred at me. Of course. Why would they not? I walked all the way to my dad's office, enjoying the guys staring and wolf whistling at me. I even smiled a little at the good-looking ones.
As I entered the bank's building, at the lobby, I felt someone's eyes on me but I did not care because everyone was looking at me. But then this gaze was.. no.. felt different.
I could feel myself getting hot. God. I turned my head towards the intriguing gaze and saw a god. A perfect Adonis. Woah, I thought.
He was staring at me and I was gazing at him too, in awe. I flushed and walked towards my dad's office with my head down the whole way. This never happened to me. If a guy stares at me which is always by the way, I would feel more confident and hold my head high. But this guy, oh my god.
As I entered my dad's office, my dad looked up and smiled. He seems to be in a good mood just like my mum. Weird.
"Hey dad," I greeted him.
He took his lunch from my hands and said in an enthusiastic voice," So, did you happen to meet my boss's son?".
"Huh?" I said, confused.
Why are we talking about his boss and his son?
" You know, good looking, tall, blonde, muscular.." my dad said.
Huh? I swear he's losing it but he seems to be describing the super hot guy. Ahh. Seeing my confused face, my dad said,
" The guy at the lobby wearing a black suit,".
" Oh, yeah." I mumbled feeling more embarrassed.
God, what is wrong with me.
"Gotta go, bye," I said to my dad before he could say anything else and left.
As I made myself back into the lobby, I bumped into someone. Hard. I looked up and saw the hot guy. Oh god, he looked much more extremely good-looking up-close. My head went blank.
Hello. My first time writing. Hope you guys like it. If you do please COMMENT and VOTE! Tq. IF YOU WANT ME TO WRITE MORE COMMENT!
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"I look fucking gorgeous" I thought as I stared into the mirror.
Hmm.. I'm vain, I know but it is true. I do look drop dead gorgeous and everyone thought so too.
"Natalie!!" I heard my mum calling me. Ugh, what does she want now? I gave one last smile at the mirror and went down the staircase. Where is she? God, this house is so friggin big.
My house is not really that big but it was big enough to show how very well off we were. You see, there isn't many huge houses here just medium sized ones. My dad works for a banking company or something and his super-wealthy-almost-billionaire-boss just promoted him.
"There you are!" said my mum as I walked in.
She looks to be happy and in a good mood, which is not always. I just stared at her.
"I want you to bring your father's lunch to his office today".
My father always brings his own lunch since he had gotten food poisoning. The event had scarred him for life.
"What? Why? Didn't he brought his lunch with him this morning?" I asked my mum.
" No, he forgot," said my mum patiently.
Since when? My dad never forgets anything.
"But why do I have to? Adam can do it," I stated referring to my 16 years old brother who was 5 years younger than me.
"Because I told you to!" said my mum a little bit pissed off but still happy nonetheless.
"But I promised my friends that I would go out.."
"You do what I tell you to do young lady!" snapped my mum, cutting me short. Sheesh.
Before I went to my dad's office, my mum forced me to wear my best and most flirty sun dresses despite my protests. What's wrong with her anyway? I'm only going to my dad's fucking office.
As I stepped outside my house, everyone starred at me. Of course. Why would they not? I walked all the way to my dad's office, enjoying the guys staring and wolf whistling at me. I even smiled a little at the good-looking ones.
As I entered the bank's building, at the lobby, I felt someone's eyes on me but I did not care because everyone was looking at me. But then this gaze was.. no.. felt different.
I could feel myself getting hot. God. I turned my head towards the intriguing gaze and saw a god. A perfect Adonis. Woah, I thought.
He was staring at me and I was gazing at him too, in awe. I flushed and walked towards my dad's office with my head down the whole way. This never happened to me. If a guy stares at me which is always by the way, I would feel more confident and hold my head high. But this guy, oh my god.
As I entered my dad's office, my dad looked up and smiled. He seems to be in a good mood just like my mum. Weird.
"Hey dad," I greeted him.
He took his lunch from my hands and said in an enthusiastic voice," So, did you happen to meet my boss's son?".
"Huh?" I said, confused.
Why are we talking about his boss and his son?
" You know, good looking, tall, blonde, muscular.." my dad said.
Huh? I swear he's losing it but he seems to be describing the super hot guy. Ahh. Seeing my confused face, my dad said,
" The guy at the lobby wearing a black suit,".
" Oh, yeah." I mumbled feeling more embarrassed.
God, what is wrong with me.
"Gotta go, bye," I said to my dad before he could say anything else and left.
As I made myself back into the lobby, I bumped into someone. Hard. I looked up and saw the hot guy. Oh god, he looked much more extremely good-looking up-close. My head went blank.
Hello. My first time writing. Hope you guys like it. If you do please COMMENT and VOTE! Tq. IF YOU WANT ME TO WRITE MORE COMMENT!
©
[PG-13] Parents Strongly Cautioned
Comments & Reviews ^topim not saying you copied it or anything but in eclipse the twilight book rosalie tells her story, and its really similar to this. i mean she goes to the bank to give her father lunch and then she meets a really good looking guy  skater_girl Jul 31, 2009 11:29 reply spam Hey! I really like the story so far!! Please check out my story The Last to Know, its my first time writing too! Kinda a budding romance thing going on! Tell me what ya think, and if I should write more!!  xBlindingLights... Jul 30, 2009 06:10 reply spam don worry.. i didn't get the story from the twilight books
i don even like reading the twilight series if so.. which book was it frm? i should try and check it out..  misssl-27- Jul 30, 2009 01:27 reply spam u know it sounds a bit (a lot?? dnt know) lyk Rosalies storie!! in twilight
plz tell me its not!!! sik of twilight but dis is really gud!!  teszgautusa Jul 30, 2009 00:32 reply spam thanks. i know the story is a bit boring for the first few chapters. i need to explain some stuff.. ya know? it will get more interesting, i promise.
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