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Bye Bye Virginity - Chapter 1

I walked down the narrow hallway, my hands tucked into the pockets of my little pink pyjama pants. The air was chilly and as I silently made my way back to my bedroom from the bathroom I thought about how I wished I grabbed my sweater. I was only wearing a little black tank-top and I was starting to feel the goose bumps arising on my arms.

The house was silent; the only noise was the sound of the wind blowing about outside the window and my big brother's snoring coming from down the hallway. My parents were away for the weekend; gone on some major golf tournament, leaving the house to me and my brother.

We were told not to have any friends over, though my brother had decided to rebel against my parent's rules and invite his utterly hot friend over for the night. I honestly didn't mind, I mean the guy was unbelievably sexy though they hadn't paid any attention to my existents all day.

As I reached my bedroom door, I turned the knob and walked into my warm and cozy room. My heart skipped a beat as I realised there was someone sitting on my bed. It took me a second to realise who it was, as relief washed over me, it was only Damen, my brothers friend.

But wait!

Why was he in my bedroom?

"Damen?" I asked, as I walked into my bedroom a little more, "What are you doing in here?"

"I couldn't sleep." He replied

"So, you decided you come into my bedroom?"

"Well, I wanted to see you..." He said as he stood up and began to walk towards me, my heart began to race a little faster.

"Me?" I asked, confused as too why he would want to see me, he was 2 years older than me and completely out of my league. "But why would you want to see me?"

"I can't get you out of my mind, Stasee." He said, he was now standing right in front of me as he brought his hand up to my face before running it through my long brown hair.

I was stunned speechless as I stood there staring at him, my heart was going faster and faster. I was sure I was going to have a heart attack right away. My heart was racing at an abnormal and unhealthy rate.

"Stasee," He said as he placed both his hands onto my hips, pulling me closer to him. "I can't explain the way you make me feel."

"I...But...You...Why...When...Do..." I stuttered, not being able to turn any of my words remotely into a sentence.

"Shhhh..." He said, "Don't say anything..."

He pulled me even closer to him as he pressed his lips gently against mine. I thought my heart was going to rip out of my chest as it thumped hard inside me. He wrapped his arms under my bum and pulled me up into a tight embrace; our lips stuck together like a magnet to metal.

He began to walk towards my bed as I felt his tongue force its way into my mouth; slowly he began drawing circles on my tongue with his. I wrapped my hands around his head, lightly tugging at his hair as he laid me gently on my bed. He slowly moved on top of me, pressing his body hard against mine.

He rested his one hand on the bed, holding himself up, preventing himself from squishing me, as his other hand went under my tank top grasping my breast. His cold hand touching my warm breast brought a shiver down my spine as I moaned loudly against his mouth.

He pulled his tongue back, presses his lips against mine for the last time before he slowly made his way down to my neck. He pressed his lips gently on my chin, making a line of kisses all the way down my neck, leaving tingles in its place. Both of our breathings were loud and fast, trying hard to gulp down air.

He brought both his hands down to the bottom of my shirt before pulling it up and over my head. Bearing my naked chest to him as his mouth found it's way down to my nipples, I could feel them began to harden as I moaned loudly.

I watched him as he sat up and pulled his own shirt off. My hands seemed to have a mind of their own as they reached up and rubbed his bare naked 8-pack. He came back down towards me, his mouth finding its way back to my chest before slowly making his way down to my waist line. Every time his soft lips touched my skin a feeling of erotic pleasure sore through my body.

I could feel him began to pulled down my pyjama pants but paid no mind to it, I was so lost in the feeling of his lips against my skin. Suddenly, I could feel the cold breeze against my bare legs, I glanced down and noticed both me and Damen were lying on my bed, completely and utterly butt naked. For the first time, a jolt of fear pierced through my body.

He must of noticed my sudden change my mood because he came closer to me, and brushed my hair out of my face.

"Are you okay?" He whispered, his breathing was loud and uneven.

"I've...I've Never done this before..." I whispered back.

He pressed his lips gently against mine and for the first time I could feel something hard rub against my leg. His mouth then found it's way to my neck, shooting tingles down my body; all my fears were then erased.

"You have nothing do be afraid of..."

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ii think yer storyy is greatt. checkk minesz outt t2. thx! :]

x_brina_x
Nov 21, 2009 22:12
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Ii think it was pretty good till it got to the "PHYSICAL STUFF".
But besides the things i pictured graphically in my mind, it was good =)

XxHearbroken...
Nov 21, 2009 19:52
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i loveeee it!!!!! please read mine!!!! Almost Dead. tell me if it's good... i'm dying.

superrrlazyy...
Nov 21, 2009 18:10
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Omq When I First Read This I Hated You Because I Thought It Was Over! But Then I Saw The New Parts And Jumped For Joy.! -Nicki

LaBellaNicki
Nov 21, 2009 01:40
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read mine to!!! i just started!" i kill demons" and "i killed my mom"!!! i love this story to. its so good! can't wait for more. keep writing! u should write something else.

moonfun899
Nov 20, 2009 14:41
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http://www.wattpad.com/243240-quot-im-like-nothing-you-have-ever-seen-before-quot-he-said-to-me

Read my story, I just started so HELP ME OUT PEOPLE! ;D

jossy-love25...
Nov 19, 2009 22:08
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wow you are a awsome writter love the stories!!

vampgirl313
Nov 19, 2009 18:57
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Pure skill, your one awesome writer :) x

Roroxxx
Nov 19, 2009 12:20
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Very nice job of capturing a moment, an intensely personal story yet universal. Great job!

RobDinsmoor
Nov 19, 2009 08:58
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I do not know what to think. Seems this guy is def fresh. And we are not sure what is his character yet. Obviously the girl likes him, but why? He is def going for the kill, but maybe wait a lil bit, and build up a little bit more your story?

Good writing!

MargaritaSha...
Nov 18, 2009 23:56
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