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They say keep this secret
They act like a best friend
But in the end its your secret
They tell to everyone
Not everyone listens
But a lot of people do
They are all talking
About you
Even if they don't believe
They don't know your side
Of the story
They keep on talking
While you keep walking
The fights start
The blood flows
And why?
No one knows
You keep walking
They keep talking
You keep crying
They don't care
Life isn't far
They all say
It hasn't been
To this very day
They all gossip
They don't care
If it destroys you
They won't be there
They just back stab
And walk away
There next victim
Is on its way
They act like a best friend
But in the end its your secret
They tell to everyone
Not everyone listens
But a lot of people do
They are all talking
About you
Even if they don't believe
They don't know your side
Of the story
They keep on talking
While you keep walking
The fights start
The blood flows
And why?
No one knows
You keep walking
They keep talking
You keep crying
They don't care
Life isn't far
They all say
It hasn't been
To this very day
They all gossip
They don't care
If it destroys you
They won't be there
They just back stab
And walk away
There next victim
Is on its way
Comments & Reviews ^topSebarau94: Of course I will check out your work!!!!!! I'm happy you love it. I love that you gave me stars too. I will give you something but it is much different but I hope you love it all the same. Here's a rose for being a first time reader. ---u---@ and another for such an amazingly nice comment: ---u---@
heartfire: thanks a bunch. It means a lot to me. :D I am so amazed that you keep commenting. :D I'm happy you have read so much. :D longtime321: I will definately keep writing. :D I love to do it so it won't be hard for me. Here's a rose for being a first time reader: ---u---@ By the way. I LOVE YOUR ICON!!! Paramore is amazing. :D Brand New Eyes is out TODAY!!!!! A wonderful day to everyone!!! <3 ~Undescribable~ ~Faith~ <3 xo  Undescribabl... Sep 29, 2009 07:24 reply spam OMG I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! * * * * * stars
can you tell me wht you think of my story nobody cares and my poem the fear..plz, it wnt take long and i wanna know where i can improve so tht i can get even better ! -x-  Sebarau94 Sep 06, 2009 09:33 reply spam Thanks for loving the poem. I only confide my secrets in three people. They are the only three I have found out will tell no one. And yes sometimes we have to fight but peace is better. If we can find peace (I'm not a hippie but I don't like the wars going on. Or when any happen.) then that route should be taken. That's my opinion though so don't anyone get the wrong idea. You have your opinions and I have mine and I'd like to keep it that way. No person is right and no person is wrong. It's all just opinions and opinions are okay to be heard but fights should not be started on here.
Thanks SapphireStar :D <3 ~Undescribable~ ~Faith~ <3 xo Undescribabl... Aug 27, 2009 07:47 reply spam Uh...you're so right! That's why I confide my secrets in no one but me..
And yes, life isnt fair, so we have to fight. I love your poem! :-) x  SapphireStar Aug 25, 2009 14:57 reply spam oops forgot the xo. :D here's an xo for all of you too. Thanks for reading. It means a lot to me. Undescribabl... Aug 25, 2009 11:10 reply spam Thanks everyone. misunderstood and mexico200912 here's a rose for each of you.
---u---@ ---u---@ I'll have to check out both yours and TWLIGHTLOVER4EVER's work. You all seem really nice. Have an amazing day. <3 ~Undescribable~ ~Faith~ <3 Undescribabl... Aug 25, 2009 11:09 reply spam 'And why?
No one knows You keep walking They keep talking You keep crying They don't care...' gosh i like the way you put everything in words!  alleycat Aug 21, 2009 15:51 reply spam |
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