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on Jul 14, 2009
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Everyone, I'm really sorry that I haven't been able to upload any sooner. Please forgive me *puppy doge eyes*
It has been two weeks without knowing anyhing about Alisa and Ian *wink* so here is Chapter 9 and today... (!!!) I swear, promise... everything that, I will post chapter 10, which is aswell done.
And Oh!! WAIT!!! I have received a lot of messages from people who don't understand parts from the story.. so if any of you have any doubts or concerns, you can email them to me to the following address.

---> mystery.vamp.chic@hotmail.com
Thanks!
And please, VOTE AND COMMENT! I mean, the vote button is only a inch away from you... just click xD!! and scroll down to leave a comment.. no matter how random it is it'll make me happy!!
So let's cut of my blabbing and lets get on with the story folks.
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Chapter Nine

I had to spend Wednesday night in the hospital. The beeping of machines and creaking of doors were getting on my nerves.
Noelle stayed with me that night, but she seemed distant her expression showed stress as she sat across from me reading her book, but I guessed it would be best not to push it. On Friday Dr. Medicci continued with his analysis until noon, where he happily told me that I was free to go home, with the strict condition of not doing anything that would make me loose energy.


I huge grin spread across my face as Noelle opened the door and turned the lights on.
"Home! Finally." I threw myself on the sofa and turned the TV looking for a interesting channel.
"Alisa." Noelle scolded me, "what did the doctor say about pushing it to the limit."
I laughed, "Noelle I just jumped, I'm not getting a fit."
She shook her head and walked towards the kitchen.
It was then I had the urge to put my pajamas on and just slouch around the house. I climbed the stairs up to my room and changed into a white tank top and shorts and to complete the look... MY FLUFFY SLIPPERS!
"Alisa I'm off to do some paper work alright?" Noelle's voice came up to my room.
"No problem." I walked down the stairs slowly feeling scared of tripping over.
"And remember to take the-"I cut her off.
"The doses, I know Noelle." I gave her a reassuring smile as she walked out the door.

I slumped on the sofa and decided to watch a movie. I chose Titanic, were I get to see Leonardo DiCaprio's lovely face (when he was YOUNG!). I was about to lie down on the sofa when the door bell rang, I paused the screen and turned to look at the clock, it was too early for Noelle to be back, and besides she always takes the key with her.

I opened the door, to see Dawn and Mandy launch themselves at me.
"You're back!" cried Dawn, her violet eyes gleaming in the light.
"We thought it wasn't true and you were still in the hospital." Mandy said cheerfully.
I laughed, "Come on in." I led through the door. "How was school?"
This time it was their turn to laugh, "Quite fun." Began Mandy, "You really do bring gossip Alisa. It was all over school how Ian took you to the hospital and how he 'took care of you'." She gave me a meaningful wink and sprawled on the floor next to the sofa.
Dawn was laughing so much her shoulders were heaving up and down, "I have Math with Trevor, and it was hysterical to watch the way in which he stomped off, or huffed every time anyone would talk about it."
I let a smiled scape my lips and I actually began laughing with them.
"Oh shoot! The doses!" I nearly forgot and made my way to the kitchen leaving the girls sitting on the floor. From a distance I saw the odd combination we made, and how by some strange matter, Mandy and Dawn had met each other and are able to be friends.
I pulled the tube from where Noelle had it kept and took some blood into the syringe; I injected quickly both doses and popped my pill into my mouth.
I walked out slowly and sat on the couch across from the girls... yeah a very odd threesome. I was pulling the needle from my arm when Mandy walked into the kitchen, she looked pointedly at the cloth I was using to wipe away the remains from my arm. "It hurts doesn't it?"
I managed a small smile, "It's a real pain. But what can I say."
She opened the fridge and pulled out a Sprite can.
"Dawn doesn't want anything?" I asked.
She shook her head, "She said she wasn't hungry."
"How come you two have become such good friends now?"
She smiled, "It's not like that, I'm still friends with Cole and Ashley. The thing is that... Dawn seems to care as much for you as I do."
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it is very twilightish you shuld try makin it more original


dont get me wrong the story is great but too much like twilight
i mean the way he warns her to stay away.and that the dad's a doctor
bu7t plz continue and im not hatin plz dont get me wrong cuz i luv this story read it 3 times already

deadgirl-ony...
Sep 09, 2009 13:32
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very twilightish......

xovbabyox
Aug 19, 2009 00:28
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I accuse you! the influinza? humph.

That's alright though. i like how you made it to where they both warned the other.

shurtugal2
Aug 10, 2009 13:44
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holy shit!
I really do like the way you write, you give soo much detail to things and you describe things so thorouhly (sp?)
I mean jesus i just loved the way you ended the hapter "I had the urge to turn around and peek through the window in order to see him walk down the street. But something told me that he would already be gone."
eeeeeepp!!! super!
please do continue! this is drving me nuts!

xxrockingmyw...
Jul 28, 2009 08:08
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love it!! fyi love how u did the pj thingyy... soz i havnt been able 2 read r comment cuz im in ny doin tnz f stuff.. soo im catchin up now jeeje besoss keep it up!

claulorvesch...
Jul 27, 2009 22:14
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eeeeeeeep!!! super! lol im seriously bitting my nails from the suspense!

xxcandygirlx...
Jul 23, 2009 18:01
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yay for 5page chapters (or more)

chico22
Jul 18, 2009 09:59
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she catching on finally

gamaran-510
Jul 17, 2009 00:35
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That was amazing! Please, please, please upload chapter 10 soon!!!!!!!!

ILOVERSYOU00...
Jul 16, 2009 00:17
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amazing! keep up the awesome work, but UPDATE FASTER!

YouAreAFever
Jul 15, 2009 20:18
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