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Crush (a Vampire love story) Chapter 5

Crush (Vampire Love Story) Chapter 5


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I walked throw the second door and went down the hall a little. That's when I noticed everyone was staring at me. So I thought while I have there attention I might as make it worth it. So I stopped and dramatically took of my sun glasses and put them on top of my head so they were out of my way, then I swept back my hair and keep walking. "Now that's an entrance" I thought to myself as I was walking.



I noticed Colby was staring at me but I didn't even look at him. And from the corner of my eye I had the satisfaction of seeing him with his mouth hanging open. Right as I passed him I heard a faint whisper from him all he said was

"Evian?" but I keep walking. After what he said I never wanted to talk to him again. I heard some whispering. Oh great (sarcasm) now the whispers start. I heard a lot of things from

"Oh my god she is hot"

"Who is she?"

To

"I didn't know we had a new girl?"

"No that's Evian, the geek with the ugly red hair"

I was close to my locker that's when I saw Bryan, from the football team standing in front of my locker like he did every day to harass me. Well today that was going to change. I was walking towards him, and there was a crowed starting to form. He must have heard of me by now, but not who I was. I walked till I was standing right in front of him; he was all smug like I was going to ask him out, uh as if.


"Hey" he said all husky. Yep he defiantly thought he was going to get lucky.

"Could you move, you're in my way" I said pointing to my locker. I said it loud enough so everyone around us could hear. His ego was defiantly hurt. Ha ha. He slide a little to the side still stun by the rejection, just enough for me to get my looker open. I was opening my locker when he finally put two and two together and said

"Evian?" god took him long enough.

"The one and only" I replied in a smart ass tone.

"Damn wow you look...." He said lost for words I got my books and closed my lock that's when I noticed Colby walking this was. I grabbed Bryans arm and asked

"Walk me too class?" he seemed stunned but managed to say

"Uh y-yeah." He grabbed my books for me and started to talk "Hey, uh, E-Evian would you go t-to the movies with me?" he asked Colby was standing next to us and I'm pretty sure he heard Bryan ask me so I said

"Yes, I'll go" with that we walked away. Leaving Colby behind and I hope he heard, and I hope it hurt him, because I want to hurt him as bad as he hurt me. Bryan and I happened to have first hour to gather so he walked with me all the way to class. When I walked into chem... Kayla was instantly in my face.

"Evian, omg, everyone in school is saying you're the hottest girl in school. Why didn't you tell me?" he asked in one breath. I just laughed she was so funny.

"Well I wanted it to be a surprise" I said simply. chem. Went fast. A lot of people talked to me especially guys. All the attention was nice. I was headed to second period, which I happened to have with Colby. I usually sat by Colby but I so was not going to today.



I walked into the class and my smile emdiantly fell there was only two seats left. Both were by Colby which is so not what I wanted. One was in front and the other was my usual seat. I walked to the open seat in front of him and noticed the guy seating next to it was the staring QB for the football team. So I turned on the charm. I gave him a 100 watt smile and said "do you mind if I sit with you?"


"Uh... uh no. that's fine" he said I smiled a bigger smile thankful he didn't say no, and sat down next to him. I was so happy that I didn't have to sit by Colby. I was going to try and avoid him as much as possible. I was waiting for the teacher to come in when I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around and it was none other than Colby.


Hey thanks for reading. Plz comment I motivates me so much. And I just love to read what you guys think!
-Koda
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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totally awesome XD rite more plz
valentinezday
valentinezday
Mar 19, 2010 15:16
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i absolutely lLOVE the way you end your stories, to hook the reader on and on and on, and its definitely working here, awesome job, addiction is the perfect word. keep on writing stories like this!
SrhKay
SrhKay
Feb 09, 2010 19:26
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I am addicted to it to
blackdog0197
blackdog0197
Jan 20, 2010 22:20
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Uuummm I'm seriously addicted love it
imavampirechickx3
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Aug 01, 2009 07:50
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Urg, i wanna know what happens next!! It's REALLY goood!!!!!!!!
jesusfreak202
jesusfreak202
Jul 22, 2009 22:07
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love it!!! please write more and fast!!!!!!!!!
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violaeatalt3
Jul 16, 2009 10:48
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anna1991
anna1991
Jul 13, 2009 21:44
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MaraChristine
MaraChristine
Jul 13, 2009 14:03
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love this plz write more!
CammieD
CammieD
Jul 13, 2009 07:41
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write more please
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Jul 13, 2009 03:36
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