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Jul 10, 2009
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Part 2 of 6
This part of the story is the other half of chapter 9. It starts from where I left off. Thank you to everyone that read chapters 1- the beggining of 9. So far over a hundred people have read it. I'm so proud of myself. Anywho if you haven't read the first part go and read it now!!!! Please don't forget to comment and vote.




Paco was smiling and he didn't know about what I had done with Drake. I laughed and pressed my lips to his. We moved to my room and then to my bed. He got ontop of me and took his shirt off. He pulled my legs up and around his waist. Unexpectedly his cell vibrated in his pocket. He moved off of me and pulled out his phone.

( Paco's Point Of View)
I looked over at Risha. She looked annoyed. I then glanced down at the phone in my hand. I had a text message. I choose to view the text. It was sent from a private number. It read: I'll be at your house in 30mins. Be there!! Ur little girlfriend ain't tellin' da truth. I hav proof!!!!!
I flipped my phone closed. I had a good guess who it was. DRAKE!! He had obviously been watching me and Risha talk. I stood up and pulled on my shirt. Risha sat up hurridly " Wait a minute where are you going" she asked. " I have to go meet somebody" I replied
" Meet who"
" Just some guy"
" Hold on, so your telling me that your gonna pass up this....to meet some guy" she countinued pointing to herself. " It's important and I promise i'll come here right afterwards ok"
" Yeah sure whatever". I turned around and walked out the door. I started heading home. My sister had the car. Her and Tonya had gone to see a movie. Risha didn't want to go so she stayed home. Anyway I reached my house and just as I suspected Drake was standing there waiting. " You're a little early. I hope my text didn't interupt anything" he said with a smile. Inside my blood boiled but I kept calm on the outside. " You already know don't you" I countinued
" Yeah you're right"
" So where is this so called proof"
" In order for you to see it, we'd have to go inside"
" I'm not letting you come in my house"
" Why I mean it's not like I haven't been in there before." I was trying to stay calm, but he was making it very difficult.
" Whatever come in" I opened the door and we walked in. We both took a seat on the couch.
" So where is it" I asked.
" It's in the VCR I put it in before you got here" He then picked up the remote. For a second I thought he looked remorseful but it quickly went away. He pressed play. I rubbed my eyes over and over and over again, but what I saw didn't change. It was true Maurisha had been with Drake and then she lied to me about it. I HATE liars with a passion. A thousand different thoughts rushed to my head. How could she do this to me...to us. I jumped up and ran out the house. I ran as fast as I could. The last time I had ran this fast was when I was in 7th grade. I was on the cross-country team and I had just one the 1st place medal. I ran faster and faster 'til I was back at Risha's house. I banged on the door until she opened it. I couldn't even look at her. " It's about time Paco" she said flirtatiously putting her arms around my neck. I snatched away roughly.

( Maurisha's Point Of View)
A look of dismay spread over my face. Why was Paco shaking me off of him. A few hours ago he was all over me. I looked at him closely. He was shaking and the tips of his ears were burning red. The tips of his ears turned red when he was pissed. " Paco what's wrong" I asked worridly. He paced back and forth. Finally he spoke " Why the FUCK did you lie to me" he screamed angrily with clenched teeth. I took a frightful step back. He couldn't have found out. He just couldn't have. " What are you talking about" I asked. " Don't play stupid Risha"
" I'm not"
" You're a LIAR and I HATE liars"
" I didn't lie" I countinued with tears streaming down my face.
" So now you have memory loss"
" No"
" YOU SLEPT WITH DRAKE. YOU CAN'T DENY IT. I SAW THE VIDEO." My knees felt weak and I couldn't breath. How could Drake do this to me. Tears fell violently down my face. " Paco i'm sorry" I tried to touch him, but he stepped back. " I could care less that you're sorry. You did this to yourself"
" Paco please"
" It's over Maurisha. I don't ever wanna talk to you again. When you see me in school, pretend i'm invisible. DON'T talk to me, don't even look in my direction!! You no longer exist to me!!" He turned and tried to walk away. I grabbed his arm tightly. " Don't do this please" I cried. He feircley yanked his arm away. " Go back to Drake" was all he said before running away too quickly for me to catch him. The weakness I felt in my knees increased and I fell to the ground. There I cried barely able to move. It felt like my heart had been ripped out and crushed. My heart was more than broken, it was torn to shreads. I didn't want to live anymore. I wanted to die!

Well that's the end of chapter 9. The next part I will upload is chapter 10!! Please comment and hopefully VOTE. Also tell me what you think. Should I countinue and upload chapter 10 or just forget about it and upload a different story. It's up to YOU. Should I countinue???????????
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I HATE DRAKE SO FRICKING MUCH. HE SHOULD JUST GO DIE IN A WHOLE GRRRRRRR I HATE HIM I HATE HIM I HATE HIM I HATE HIM, WHO WOULD DO THAT TO SOMEONE REALLY!!! AWW POOR PACOOOO.. ANDDD RISHA, IM GOING TO KILLLL HIMMM. lol the end
Mia_xo
Mia_xo
Nov 28, 2009 00:57
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omg!!! this is sooo good!!!! im sorta freaked out by it but thats a good thing!!! lolz. def. write more cuz this is just soooooo awesome its not even funni!!!!!
laney23
laney23
Aug 01, 2009 17:07
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u should definitely continue

please upload chapter 10 soon

it's really good.. i love it!!

tnx for posting!!
rtql8_en
rtql8_en
Jul 30, 2009 08:26
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really good!!! upload chapter ten soon
sydster101
sydster101
Jul 24, 2009 11:26
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taybay, check out what i wrote here:

http://www.wattpad.com/163259-HELP-PLAGIARISM-PLEASE-READ-ebby13xox-author-of-quot-You-know-you-want-to-read-this-No-title-yet-quot-

(thankyou, hablabla...lmao nice name)

its true, she is a fake and a theif. you should check out my stories, which are where she gets her ideas from.


also, nice stories!!!! you are talented!
KillMeRomantically
KillMeRomantica...
Jul 21, 2009 09:47
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upload more i love it i would vote but i don't know how lol sorry
nativebecca
nativebecca
Jul 15, 2009 23:39
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OMG you have to continue. i love it girl, writeing this story is a passion 4 u. UPLOAD MORE..... :ppp i love it
XcomptonX
XcomptonX
Jul 11, 2009 20:28
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hell yes continue
demi23yahoo
demi23yahoo
Jul 11, 2009 18:15
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hell yes continue
demi23yahoo
demi23yahoo
Jul 11, 2009 18:15
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hell yes continue
demi23yahoo
demi23yahoo
Jul 11, 2009 18:15
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