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you got to love boarding school ch.3

Chapter 3





I'm not for sure that I'm dreaming. I'm at the beach and the wind is blowing very genteelly against my skin. I feel like some one is staring at me. I turn very slowly to see who it is. But before I could someone started calling my name. I didn't respond. Then something stared shaking me and calling my name.
"MELINDA WAKE UP!" then very slowly I woke up. I turn my head and there sat
Robert. Looking at me.



"hey"

"hey" said Robert

"how long was I out?"

"long enough for me, Matt, and Luke to go eat and to do are laundry and for me to watch you sleep."

"wow! What time is it?"
"12 maybe 1 in the morning"

"Wow I need to take a shower."

"okay"

I went to my room to get some clothes. I went down the hall to the bathroom and turn on the water I was almost done when I here snickering out side the door. I wait for a second to see if I would hear it again. Nothing happened so I turn off the water and grab a towel and start to dry off when I hear someone snickering again I quickly put on my clothes and lean against the door and I hear two voices one I know for sure is Robert and the other I think is Luke.
"Robert what are you doing?" says Luke

"waiting on Melinda to get out"

"oh. Is that all?"

"yeah"

Well I now this conversation was not going anywhere so I open the door and walked out and into my room . I take out my ipod and my cell phone and look to see I have 7 unread messages. There all from Beth. I am so tired that I didn't text her bake I put in my ipod and went to sleep.



The next day I woke up to sun light and the smell off eggs. My stomach growled and I giggled . I got up got some clothes for a shower and went down the hallway I open the door and I was about to take off my clothes when Robert came around the corner and stop and just stares at me. I got tired and looked at him and said " will you please get out I'm going to take a shower."
He shakes his head and walks out. I go back to what I 'm was doing. About 10 minutes later. I was done. I got dressed and walk out only to be stopped by Luke
.
"hey Melinda! How are you?"

"I'm good. You?"

"Good good. Um.... I was wondering? You know you want to go out some time and I don't know....... Maybe see a movie or something."

I just stares at him and didn't say anything .

"melinda did you hear me? Say something!"

I didn't know what to say.

"um....... That is very sweet. I don't know what to say."

"say yes and we can go."

"um.. Luke I think of you as a friend can we go as friends?"

I know I hurt his fillings 'cause his small disappears


"o.. well if you want it like that then I guess we could go as friends."

"okay... well I hungry."

I walked into the kitchen and got a plate and ate some eggs. When I was done I put the plate in the sink. Which I cleaned and put away. I walked bake to my room and sit down on my bed and take out my phone. And called her .It's the weekend so she's out of school.
She answered on the third ring.
"Hello?"

"Hey Beth! How are you doing?"

"OMG! Melinda is that you? I'm doing fine! How are you? Are you okay?"

"yes and no. I just found out that this was a all boys school and one of them as me out."

"really your at and all boys boarding school?"

"yes"

" man I wish I was you the boys here all suck! Excepted John."

John is Beths crush.


"so how is John?"

"fine as always!"

"as he asked you out yet?"

"no. he as be busy at he dads restaurant so I really haven't been talking to him."

"oh. To bad. I bet when things slow down he will."

"yea he can't resist me!"

"haha no he can't well I got to go I'm just called to say hi and everything"

"alright bye"

"bye"
Hang up the phone and lay down on the bed and derived off to sleep.








Okay here is chapter 3. chapter 4 well be out soon!
[PG] Parental Guidance Suggested

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When is chapter 4 out? This story is really good.
Hyltonjess
Hyltonjess
Sep 02, 2009 13:31
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this is good but if you can you should try to make
the chapters longer and is it just me or does this
girl sleep a lot lol
amuos50
amuos50
Aug 18, 2009 06:10
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she sleeps a LOT but i like it beth is funny
skater_girl
skater_girl
Aug 01, 2009 19:59
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Sorry I just thought because of the tenses and using bake for the word back I assumed sorry btw I recommendedyour story to my trend she has commented. I truly believe this book is great and can't wait for more also me and were talking today and agree we want a life like melindas.
Hyltonjess
Hyltonjess
Jul 14, 2009 15:18
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It's really good ... can't wait to read what happens next =]
RebelliousAndProud
RebelliousAndPr...
Jul 14, 2009 13:23
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yea you all can give me ideas. for starters an idea for the next chapter. thanks for the comment and for the ideas tell me on twitter my user name is oreogirl17 thanks!
foreverreading
foreverreading
Jul 13, 2009 08:59
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its very good it is slightly blunt though you are a great writer and you should really get into your characters if im allowed to give an idea i would make your characters feelings stronger and make the chapters longer keep writing u rock
=) HEHE
musicblood921
musicblood921
Jul 13, 2009 07:55
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It's amazing, when you had the boys snickering i thought that they were peaking through haha really good. Can I ask is english your native tounge?
Hyltonjess
Hyltonjess
Jul 13, 2009 01:58
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i like it very much can't w8 for the next chap.
BlackButterfly
BlackButterfly
Jul 11, 2009 23:14
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I agree it is good...and a little blunt...try being a little more descriptive about feelings, facial expressions, or surroundings. Keep writing!
blumreich
blumreich
Jul 11, 2009 08:37
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