Kisses of death


"Hey, dad I'm going for a walk..catch you later" I called grabbing my raincoat."Okay but dont make me come looking for you" he responded i grabbed my keys and phone and stepped out side taking a deep breath of the fresh air .I locked the door and gazed up at the sky letting the rain pour down on me , i twirled around looking at the stars. Damn, they're so pretty. See were i live in there aren't many lights illuminating the streets and it's not the whole city scene more like a little town where everybody knows everything about everybody.I just love taking walks at night in the rain it just makes me feel so freaking alive.
As i was passing the neighboors house i felt something wrong, way wrong i heard footsteps behind me and swirved around and there before me was the most gorgeus man i've ever seen literally. wtf? there aren't many good looking poeple where i live, and how come i never noticed him before? i stared in to his bright red eyes and it felt as though they were peircing through me ,i looked away he was really tall and had pale skin ,and it was smoothe he was just so beautiful ! suddenly my gut was telling me to run. and as i was turning around an awful grin sread across his face he reached out a hand to me and touched my cheek, damn he was cold ! "don't be scared, it's alright i just need you for a second trust me it wont hurt" i want to but i cant this is totally wrong.." no you fucking sick bastard!!!" i yelled.I started to run but he caught me and grabbed me by my arm dragging me back, he pulled me up and whispered angirly" I will have you no matter what". he opened his mouth and pulled me closer and then i was dropped there was a blinding light and everything went black.


Okay, so this is my first time writing a story..i have really good ideas but i just find it reeeeally hard to make it sound good, please dont be harsh=] should i keep writing?
-me
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