seduce then killed

SO this is one of the best storys I think I have ever put up here so I hope you guys and girls like it. I want to give my sis a big hug for helping me with it and a best fan for help making a cover

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SEEK PEEK( what happens later)

"HELP HELP" I yelled watching the blood soak my leg as I sat there not knowing what to do. my hands chain behind my back the blood running from them."

"JOHN WAKE UP PLEASE GET UP JOHN?" I cried, I remember him telling me that he would always be there for me and now look at him the best person in the world on the ground blood covering his face.I knew I wasn't going to get out this ,and if I could would I want to live to see the out come?

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So guys please tell me what u think about this part. Do u think it gives to much away? or is it lame? or what? please vote and comment. I am putting this up for Watty Awards so please give feedback <3 my fans.