freedom

flying like a bird,

stinging like a bee,

going through nature,

like you and me.

soaring into the sky,

like an eagle up high,

parent's down below,

finding it hard to say bye.

flying like a bird,

stinging like a bee,

going through nature,

like you and me.

soaring high,

 flying free,

just like you and me,

finding it hard to say good bye.



its not quite finished yet but ill keep adding to it at the moment my brains not responding do tell me if i need to change any of it or add anything i would really love to hear what you have to say about it and i would love to know where im going wrong and things thanks anyway and please do give me feed back please i would realy love to hear from you plus this is like my first poem i have ever done thanks again.

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lizzie xxx