The Alpha who gets a freak as his mate!{BOOK I- Werewolf Series} (Major Editing)

A short message- I really dont know why but have you people stopped liking the story? Is there something wrong with the way i write cause i feel as if the support system has just gone down drastically. I really like it when people comment and say upload soon. But can you please tell me what you think? So that atleast i can improve. I dont know how many of you read this. But if you are then please tell me what is wrong.

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CHAPTER 10

DRAKE'S POV

I cradled Emily in my arms as I reached the pack house. I could feel her heart failing and I ran up the stairs and laid her on my bed.

I ran out of the room and made my way to the pack doctor's house.

I knocked violently on the door, feeling my body consumed with fear at every passing moment.

Shit! She had to be ok.

"Open up" I shouted and after some time the door opened and the doctor looked at me shocked.

"What the hell?" He asked as I pulled him out.

"My mate is in a critical condition; get your bag of medicines. If something happens to her I will murder you with my bare hands" I shouted and he shook and ran back inside his house.

I waited outside patiently worried about Emily all the time.

She had to be ok.

I looked up and noticed that the doctor was standing in front of me with his bag.

We both ran back to the pack house and I took him to the room.

"In here" I shouted as I banged open my bedroom door and noticed no one there.

Emily was lying on the bed and her heart was very faint. I could barely hear it.

"Hurry" I shouted and the doctor ran towards her and got on with his work.

I looked at her pained as he cleaned her wound and started putting some drips.

"What’s going on?" I asked an hour later when he got up and came towards me.

"I am sorry." He whispered and I caught hold of him and banged him against the wall.

"Sorry?" I growled and he looked at me shocked.

"No she isn’t dead. She is in coma" He whispered and that when I felt my world come crashing down.

My mate was in coma

TRESSA'S POV

I made my way in the cafeteria and frowned when I found Emily nowhere.

Where was she? Was she with Drake?

I wandered towards the food table and picked up stuff and paid for it.

I went and sat down in a far corner, frowning at the fact that I still couldn’t find her.

Maybe she bunked? She could have gone somewhere with Drake? Right?

"We need to go" a voice said and my eyes snapped towards the person and I saw Jake standing there and looking at me,

"What?" I asked as if I hadn’t heard him correctly.

Go where?

"Emily is at Drake's house. Her father attacked her. I just got his call. Her condition is critical" he whispered his face expressionless.

How could he be so cold? That was my best friend and he just had to be so insensitive.

"Take me there please" I whispered as I got up and followed after him.

I felt tears streaming down my face.

Emily was like a sister that I never had. She was the only real friend that I had.

I couldn’t afford to lose her.

But how did Drake find her? When did she get attacked? I didn’t even know she left school. Did she get attacked here?

I shook my head clearing out thoughts. I could deal with all that later. Emily would tell me on her own.

"How critical?" I whispered and Jake looked at me confused.

"What?" He asked and I had to keep my hands to myself from stopping to hit him.

"How critical is she?" I whispered asked and he motioned me to get into the car.

"Coma" he said with a shrug and I felt anger seeping in my body.

"You insensitive ass. Can’t you have some compassion?" I shouted at him and he turned to glare at me.

"Why should I? She and you mean nothing to me" he said with a cold glare and I turned away from him, fighting tears all the time.

And here I believed Emily, thinking that he was nice.

He would be just like my father.

All guys were like this. None of them were trustworthy. But Drake had saved her. That means Em must mean something to him.