AVENUE #624 (Around the Carrousel Ride)

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Au's Note:

This is a short story I know almost everyone has experienced. Love.

Hope you enjoy my first. ;)

Love and irregular heartbeats,

Your excellency

XOXX

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AROUND THE CARROUSEL RIDE.

It was quarter after nine and I was with my brother.

The wind was calm but I momentarily didn't

know what happened that suddenly it rushed

through my hair, surveying my body and as if

checking if there's something wrong.

My feet didn't cease from pacing almost half - around the ride; an abrupt plunge of feeling was

abstruse and detachable from inside me which

was unfamiliar. More like obnoxious, chaotic

that I don't want it.

Then, I came to cross one hundred and eighty - seven degrees of the circle; facing forth my left side - I saw him, apparently, laughing, gesturing his hand to touch his friend's for a sign of indeed embarked approval.

He was wearing brown denim jeans,

buttermilk shirt and around his wrist, a pair of

somewhat you - are - my - dude bracelet and I,

was on my instant, inane smile burst further

with more crooked curve.

Perplexed with what I did and actually with what I had felt, I managed to turn aback few steps - my prophetic but slow - catching mind at last told myself, "I DON'T KNOW HIM".

I continued, yet,

"KESSES!"

the familiarity of the prior voice who just called my name was nothing but making me tensed

because I know that mine (lips) was closely

stapled and the talking brain got idea not to

paste my eyes on the stranger but to just find

my way out the awkward circumstance.

Still I continued one last my unfinished backward - forward step.

He called out again, "HEY!"

I turned around and faced an as - if - I - didn't -

hear - the - first call peculiar face. Shocked, I

was glued on the sandy land where I stood,

flabbergasted, the gashing wind now blow my

hair many forwards and backwards and I

definitely assumed I looked dumb and rationally

a real state of someone to laugh at with.

John.

A senior high and stands 5'10.

He is my brother, the man behind the voice who accidentally broke my concealed assumption that it was the guy.

John, with his left arm like slapping for my

fast recovery sake, said, "THIS IS KEVIN, A

GOOD FRIEND OF MINE... (he was saying more

but I heard nothing)."

Kevin grinned more like he knew me already. He wore a buttermilk shirt with a note 'I LOVE MY GIRL', brown jeans and his right hand outstretched, arm extended.

I was so stupid not to notice my brother on his

side - because it felt like he stood alone,

sparkling.

Now, I was grasping for more air to

sanction my busted engine consisting my

passive brain, my sensible cardiac organ and my

literally rhetoric lips. Stupidly, I stood indignant

for myself for I was attached to him. I didn't

heat them say something due to KESSES - IS -

OFFLINE unavailability. My whole precious

attention was only for him.

Then, it faded, faded, faded one by one. The dark night gave me the emotion of having the primary, fast, weird beat of my heart, fast momentum of my sparkled eyes with my hair gleefully danced in

joy and the first malfunctioned of my intangible

brain.

And it all felt like it was the first when I was AROUND THE CARROUSEL RIDE.

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